(i) Mole fractions
(ii) Partial pressures at $138.0\;\text{kPa}$
Equations $p_i=\chi_i P_{\text{tot}}$
Slip-ups forgetting total moles, rounding mole fractions too early, mixing bar and kPa
(i) $\Delta_\mathrm f H^\circ[\mathrm{C_{16}H_{34}(l)}] = -4.55\times10^{2};\text{kJ mol}^{-1}$
(ii) $\Delta U = \Delta H -\Delta n_\mathrm{gas}RT = -1.07\times10^{4};\text{kJ mol}^{-1}$
Equations: Hess: $\Delta_\mathrm r H^\circ=\sum n\Delta_\mathrm f H^\circ(\text{prod})-\sum n\Delta_\mathrm f H^\circ(\text{reac})\\\Delta U=\Delta H-\Delta n_\mathrm{gas}RT$
Slip-ups sign of Δn, using 8.314 J mol⁻¹ K⁻¹ but forgetting to convert to kJ.